Original film before some changes were made.

This is our film that was watched by the rest of the class, they offered some improvements to our film.


Some of the improvements that were suggested were;
-Make some of the footage longer in the tiltle sequence, the class thought the story of the sequence would be easier to follow if some of the shots were longer.
-There was an unintentional edit error on the fade between the title sequence and the opening scene, it showed a piece of footage from the menu screen of the television, which needed to be edited out.
-Edit the last shot out, were claire looks in the kitchen to look for the figure, this because the sudience thought that she was too casual while looking for the figure, and in real life she would be panicing a lot more.
-The roles we chose inside our group needed to be change on the title sequence, so 'camera' was changed to 'director of photography' etc.
-Add background music to when the book is found to build tension.